Hello. I have not actually tested it on a 32bit system. If you tried it and it didn't work, let me know. I'm not sure if the default renpy build is for 64bit or 32bit.
I've found a few possible bugs comparing two routes in v1.1:
After selecting "stop fantasizing" during the photo session, the MC gets to know that the name of "Officer Grumpy" is Arnette. But during the lineup after the lunch and before the first choice at this stage, MC keeps naming Officer Grumpy, and then suddenly changes to Officer Arnette after seleting to stand in Arnette's line.
After selecting "stop fantasizing" during the photo session, MC can only choose to interact with inmates after the lineup even if having had chosen Arnette's line. But if the player chose to fantisize during the photo session, MC can choose to interact with the officer.
Another possible artifact is that during the lunch, there're always a lot of inmates seen eating in the background when MC and his friends are talking, except when only Carl is seen to be talking in the view. When he talks, there're almost zero inmate in the background despite that there're 4 tables in the view, which seems kinda weird. (I know Eric is yet to take a sit, but still…)
I'm not sure which you're referring to. (Although there's no full sex scene yet with Arnette.) There's a brief shot of him giving a blow*** to MC(imagination) after lunch. Then there's the scene with him in your bed(imagined) after you choose to hangout with him and be brave enough to tell him how you feel. Both of these unlocks are guaranteed if you choose to fantasize about him in the photo scene. If you don't fantasize about him, there's still a way to get the other unlocks, make sure you at least choose to
Reciprocate with a confident stare. (photo scene)
Glance at him again. (photo scene)
(If you reach this point and not fantasize, you get a small scene where Mike and the other officer will gossip about him.) Make sure you choose: "You shouldn't take advantage of his eagerness" and NOT "Better not interfere".
Make sure to also stay in line during the inspection.
(By the way, as I said in the previous comment, I'll be making a small in-game guide that will give hints to what each choice does.)
Hi. Thank you for your message. As for Officer Arnette, (Arnette is his last name, we still don't know his first name, unlike Officer Mike who's called by his first name.) yeah, I see what you mean. There's a portion where the the other inmates and the narration calls him Arnette but MC still calls him grumpy but switches to "Arnette" in a few lines. Although the intention was to suggest that he uses them interchangeable as a part of a habit of only recently learning his last name and was used to Grumpy, but I can understand its a bit jarring and I'll re-read that part later.
As for your second point, yes, Officer Arnette is only available as a choice to hang out with if you meet a certain condition, unlike the three other inmates who are there no matter what. There's an internal point system that tracks how much interest the player has with a particular character. With Arnette, if you reach that point where you fantasized about him, you can pretty much unlock most of his scenes in this update. (I'll soon make an in-game walkthrough option that gives tips on what each choice does.)
As for the last part during lunch. Yeah, haha. It does seem like they're all grouped to one side. I did actually place more inmates there than the other side of the room. There were inmates behind Carl but at that specific angle from Carl towards the table where Eric sits, there weren't. I guess the shots I took emphasized how empty that part is. I'll keep this in mind in future scenes.
I literally just came across this by chance, and I'm so glad I did. Just like everyone else is saying, the character designs in the VN are so good and more importantly, very diverse from body types to faces, even with the main characters which I feel is even more rare. Speaking of main characters, I didn't even read the notes that talked about the subtle differences between all the MC options, I just discovered it myself and I was blown away even further coming back here to read that you plan on developing each MC choice even more to make each playthrough different. Don't even get me started on the sex scenes, (I am IN LOVE with Ed :-D) the premise of this story being somebody that does nothing but daydream about having relationships make me feel called about, but I think that's also a reason why I like it so much already LOL I'm not usually one for horror, but the way it's integrated in the game is so interesting that I really don't mind it. I do wish that you could somehow partner up with someone like Hyungry who makes animated sex scenes with Sims models to make it that much hotter, or even the Average Neighbor, which also makes animated sex scenes but based off real and video game characters and makes it look super realistic, I would love to see Ed in action, but a guy can dream... Anyways I'm sorry for having such a long message, but I really felt like you needed to know that you're doing a very good job, and I love a good VN that makes me horny, invested and excited for more all at the same time, and this one does just that. :-)
Thank you so much. Your comment gave me a boost today. I am actually exploring animations as well and have done some tests. I do like to add that in the future particularly in sexy scenes but I'm not making promises yet as I'm still in the process of improving the models themselves(they're okay for still images but some parts don't behave correctly when moving. I'm working on it.) Thank you for your message, it really means a lot to me.
Damn these are the best quality renders and models I've seen in any 3D gay game, not to mention how hot the guys are (Ed and Grumpy in particular for me 👀). On top of that the story so far is interesting and I appreciate the attention to details of giving the 3 protagonist different dialogues at certain moments depending on their personality and background. Can't wait to see more!
Thank you. I appreciate the kind words. I'm still starting out on differentiating the 3 MCs and have a few things planned. It's restrained for now to different dialogues because its tricky to have diverging arcs this early. But to have unique choices and paths for each MC is the goal.
Dev, the 1.1 is good but Not good as 1.0, the talking in Dining hall seems too much , actually Just mention few words is enough. It seems Reduces gameplay but doesn't say anything that actually matters
Thank you for your feedback. It is definitely something I'm reviewing in this update. There's a lot of exposition especially in that lunch scene, not to mention it's a tad too long as well. You pointing it out helps me gauge it. I also thought there's less involvement from players here overall compared to the previous one and some feedback I've got is asking for more of those. I'll keep this in mind moving forward.
I think words are repeated several times in dining hall talking, it's important for dream afterwards, but we only need to know eric may have knife then scare someone and go to med , and we don't need to explain why, it's "leave blank", there is no need to spare the room for those words that can let readers to supplement, also when eric in, "our" reaction is completely useless, too old plot.
Oh my god, you're right. I re-read the scene and it feels like I've mentioned that detail too many times, then repeat it during the final scene with Aaron. I'm rewriting this scene right now. SPOILER warning FOR OTHERS - Cutting some stuff including all links of Eric stealing the knife since that is mentioned in the last scene anyway. Thank you for this.
Hello. I used Blender for majority of the stuff but other software are involved especially for texturing(Substance Painter) and refining the shapes of the models by sculpting(Zbrush) but Blender's recent improvements in their sculpting tools put it almost at par with what you get in zbrush but I'm not used to it yet.
Does anyone know programs that translate this type of visual novels? The plot looks interesting, but I won't be able to read it because English is not my first language and I'm having trouble learning it.
I use VNTranslator, super easy to use. Just install it on your computer and open the game, after that press shift + C and all texts will be taken to the program, which has a floating window with real-time translation. You will only need to configure the theme, font, size and color of the letters, but this is easy to find on YouTube.
Thank you very much for the help I'm going to try it, do you know any video that can help me to configure, the only ones that appear in the search are only demo videos.
Okay, WOW, I was definitely not expecting that. I'm used to smut with some story to go with it, but damn, this is really something more ! I'm really hooked, and I can't wait to play the rest of the game ! I mean the scenes were amazing, but the horror parts were also really good ! This was a very good surprise, even in this early state. Well done ! I'll follow this closely :D Night !
Loving it so far! The models look fantastic (and I'm very picky about 3D stuff), the dreams are sexy and I'm very intrigued by what is going on with Dr. Kent. Can't wait for the next update!
the game is so cool, there is a story line while still ensuring gameplay--sex, but I suggest handcuffs can be smaller and fit for wrist， hands position more natural.
Wish I can get visa few months later that I can support you.
Everything is so goooooooooooooooooooooooood, the visual part is by far one of the best I've ever seen, the characters are so well made and realistic with even the smallest detail (face pores, beard, the reddish of skin, etc). The story kinda feels confusing because it's still the v1.0, but the premise looks interesting, paired with the visual aspect, it's just too good.
I'm looking forward to seeing this game's progress and maaaan, I'm just too impressed.
The character designs are great! They're not the typical models you see on hundreds of VN's on this site and others. It's like a breath of fresh air, and not only that, but the story really is interesting.
I'm definitely putting this on my watch list! I pray for your success timoteoxo!
I usually feel super awkward with that kind of game (uncanny valley) but the art is rather good and not too intimidating to me! Also, I won't lie, I was expecting just spending a silly time but... no? It turned to be an interesting story and it suddenly became more than just a smut game (nothing wrong only being a smut game for the sake of smut but I enjoy story too!). I love the fact we can choose our character, would have loved to be able to answer myself during the therapy session but I understand, as someone who also worked on this kind of narrative, having to many branches to your story can turns the thing into a true nightmare ^^' Do what you are aiming for, and if one day you want to polish a bit the game, you can always add a few things :D In any case, I was delighted by this adventure, I can't wait to see more of it! And see what's the deal with... dr. Kent >.>'
P.S.: I'll get a job soon, so I should be able to give some support somedays!
Really interesting concept going beyond the classic prison fantasy, solid art. I see you are planning a mix of body types. I am more interested to see where the plot goes which is a compliment:) I think the prison fantasy is being subverted to a very large extent, I'd actually hope there are options among the routes you can take for something more traditional but ofc only if you are comfortable with noncon. Are you planning to get kinky with the sex? The dream sequence with Dr. Kent suggested so.
Thanks. The plan is definitely for multiple choices that should lead to different routes for every character and having some of those choices be rather unusual. Regarding the kinky stuff - can't confirm can't deny XD.
Hi, I've just finished figuring this one out. My Renpy was finicky with the java requirements for building on Android and I just managed to make it work today. So now I'm able to build it. I just need to test it first a couple of times before I'll post it here. Thanks for reaching out.
Great little tease for your game. Love the detail of the blinking eyes in the sprites, it's a nice little touch. And the music works really well with the atmosphere. Plus your body types/variety is on point, that you shouldn't alter for anyone. It's your vision, and my goodness you have a knack for such a sexy vision... Love the burly men with the round rumps Ed is an instant fav. Lastly great work with using the blur and sharpness to show what you want people to be paying attention to. Keep up the amazing work
Thank you so much. Im definitely going for the bear/bara types initially but I did make a few fit/lean types because I also want that kind of contrast in the intimate scenes.(Im one of the few who's into the fit/lean tops big bear bottom kind of scenes but the opposite is also hot). Theres a few more guys coming. And they fall into a variety of these body types.
And regarding the blur. Its a pet peeve of mine when the shot is so crystal clear all the way to the back. It works on an establishing shots but definitely feels artificial when there should be movement or focus.
Oh, I like all the body types you have going on... I'm a fan of just muscles in general, and manly looking dudes. Fit and lean, muscle built, muscle chub, basically anything with some form of muscle. And I'm also into the smaller built guy topping... but I more or less like the character I'm playing to be a top, or have choices on what the player character can do in sex scenes. But that's just me, you make this game the way you want<3 Also seems like this game might have some fun bondage play going on XD
bro dont ever change your body type preference for anyone. When i saw the character design, i was like "oh oke, that is rare" and then i clicked on the game and all the characters are like this, and i slapped myself " am i dreaming?" lmao.
Thank you. A lot of it was done in blender.(which is free) but you need a few addons for certain tasks and some of them are paid. The final renders are in blender. I did all the hairs except the beards with an amazing blender addon called Hair Tool. The beards and some of the other assets were from a previous project I was involved in. The models were made using a blender addon that generates humans but its only halfway there. I still needed to refine them in a sculpting software(zbrush) and texture them(substance painter) both software I got from that previous work. This is a process you usually find for 3d games not VNs. The downside is you make a lot of things from scratch. I started making the models last November. The benefit is that you have better influence over how the final output looks.
So that's why your characters look so nice. the usual Daz characters used on these ren'py VNs tend to be a little... repetitive, and sometimes they look really weird. But your models look so natural, just seeing David's expressions on the dialogue was a touch that makes the game feel more like a conversation.
Thanks. I was actually considering Daz at the beginning. The benefit of Daz is how quicker you could immediately start building scenes because the assets are already there(though you might have to buy a few of them). I ended up not going the Daz route because I'm already a bit familiar with the process I did for this VN and some of the software I already have, I might as well take advantage of those. But it does take a lot more time though.
Thanks for the breakdown of your process! Your game immediately struck me for much the same reason as the other commenter. I'm really impressed by all you've utilized for this and your models are aspirational haha
Hi, I was just wondering if you were willing to let us know what this previous project was (was it a game? which game?), and if it was a game, was it a gay game (because I absolutely love the art in this, and would love to try out something with similar art). I understand it might not have been a game, or might not have been released, and you also might not be allowed to let people know, or want and are comfortable with others knowing, but I just thought I would ask anyways.
You got an amazing game on hand here, with hunky sexy characters (the beefier the bottom the better for me), and the writings also top notch. Keep up the good work, hope you end up with an amazing game.
Hello. Thanks for reaching out. The previous project was a small one that's not gay-related or adult, and not a game. It's kind of an animation part of a short film and I was involved with it but only briefly. I'm not really sure what happened with it too, I feel like it must have been shelved or something. You're not missing out not knowing what it is, I promise...;)
Oh my god... the characters looks so amazing and hot... every one of them, I love it. I LOVE that you went for the bara types, as soon as I get time I'll download the demo.
Thank you. I was worried about people not connecting with David because he's kind of in the middle/average but he's exactly the type of character I wanted to make. Not as fit as the others but have hints that he once was, not exactly young.. The kind of guy that gets overlooked often and you don't understand why because you find him very sexy. That kind of character.
He looks really hot. I'm in love with David. His expressions at the dialogues are so sweet, it's the prototype of a daddy.
And I also want to mention how nice is that you include an afroamerican MC too! I'm re-playing with Devin as soon as I get to see everything with David.
Thank you. For now they have the same scenes just with different CGs. But there are a few hints here and there, some lines of dialogue that give a bit of clue where they will differ.
I agree, keep going with the bodybuilder/bara theme. I wouldn't mind if you introduce fat/chubby bears too, but That's only me, the game is fantastic as it is
I've played your game and it looks fantastic; and I'm very intriged about this daydreams plotline. The art is very good and even has music to solidy the game experience. I'll keep an eye on this VN and watch as it develops. Good luck with your game and happy premiere. Hugs.
PD: I really like the body of the characters, nothing to complain here; rather, I only have good things to say. I'm very fond of gym, workout and body worship porn (like JimmyZ Bodybuilder's Jam), so this for me is glorious, haha. So, if in the future you're going to add more characters and/or remake some of the one you already have, the bigger their boobs and ass, the better for me, haha (I can only imagine Ed with bigger tits and... 🤤😋)
Thank you so much. Oh my. Haha. I myself like the slightly bara/bear with the pronounced pecs so I'm a bit biased towards that but I'll try not to make it too obvious. :) I'm gauging what people like and accommodate them. There's still room, I still have a few characters to introduce.
Personally, I'm very into, gamewise, atheletic/fit guys with very big pecs (and asses too). I'm just very fond of that, haha. And, I know that that type of bodies are very unrealistic, but hell, it's a game, it's a fantasy. So, yes, I'll love to see this big guys worshipping and working out their big, and maybe unrealistic, pecs and asses. :D
Hey thanks for the feedback. I originally did intend to skew heavily towards bear/bara as that is what appeals to me but ended up including Fit/Athletic body types like Mike, Tarriq, MC-Devin, and Dr. Kent. They're fit/lean and athletic and definitely do not count as bodybuilders. Some of the bulkier characters like Evan and David do not necessarily count as body builders either but I understand most people would consider them as such. "Grumpy" is the only one, so far, that is a bodybuilder but even he has a good belly like Ed when naked. ;)
Hi, thanks for your answer and, mostly, for your game :-) I understand everybody has their own preferences, however in general, more body-types you insert (and the differences should really marked) the most people you will engage in your game and possibly also convince to support. Just saying :-) Sweet kisses and best wishes :-)
Yeah. Thanks. I'm beginning to understand that as well, I'll definitely try to accommodate that but maybe a bit later, as the next few stuff have been mapped out already.
Hello, thanks for reaching out. I'll admit I do intend on leaning towards bara/bear type characters. With that said, I did end up making lean/fit/athletic character that do not fit that mold and have a few of them coming up. I'm guessing, based on your username, that you are looking for shota-type characters? Unfortunately, I don't have any plans of adding a shota or similar type of character.
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hi. it doesn't work on windows 32 bit. right?
Hello. I have not actually tested it on a 32bit system. If you tried it and it didn't work, let me know. I'm not sure if the default renpy build is for 64bit or 32bit.
I tried and it didn't work.
Thank you. I'll look into it and get back to you. It seems I have to specify to include a 32bit build, it doesn't do it by default.
I've found a few possible bugs comparing two routes in v1.1:
Another possible artifact is that during the lunch, there're always a lot of inmates seen eating in the background when MC and his friends are talking, except when only Carl is seen to be talking in the view. When he talks, there're almost zero inmate in the background despite that there're 4 tables in the view, which seems kinda weird. (I know Eric is yet to take a sit, but still…)
Bonus question: How can I get into the route for Arnette's sexual scene? ;)
I'm not sure which you're referring to. (Although there's no full sex scene yet with Arnette.) There's a brief shot of him giving a blow*** to MC(imagination) after lunch. Then there's the scene with him in your bed(imagined) after you choose to hangout with him and be brave enough to tell him how you feel. Both of these unlocks are guaranteed if you choose to fantasize about him in the photo scene. If you don't fantasize about him, there's still a way to get the other unlocks, make sure you at least choose to
(If you reach this point and not fantasize, you get a small scene where Mike and the other officer will gossip about him.) Make sure you choose: "You shouldn't take advantage of his eagerness" and NOT "Better not interfere".
Make sure to also stay in line during the inspection.
(By the way, as I said in the previous comment, I'll be making a small in-game guide that will give hints to what each choice does.)
Hi. Thank you for your message. As for Officer Arnette, (Arnette is his last name, we still don't know his first name, unlike Officer Mike who's called by his first name.) yeah, I see what you mean. There's a portion where the the other inmates and the narration calls him Arnette but MC still calls him grumpy but switches to "Arnette" in a few lines. Although the intention was to suggest that he uses them interchangeable as a part of a habit of only recently learning his last name and was used to Grumpy, but I can understand its a bit jarring and I'll re-read that part later.
As for your second point, yes, Officer Arnette is only available as a choice to hang out with if you meet a certain condition, unlike the three other inmates who are there no matter what. There's an internal point system that tracks how much interest the player has with a particular character. With Arnette, if you reach that point where you fantasized about him, you can pretty much unlock most of his scenes in this update. (I'll soon make an in-game walkthrough option that gives tips on what each choice does.)
As for the last part during lunch. Yeah, haha. It does seem like they're all grouped to one side. I did actually place more inmates there than the other side of the room. There were inmates behind Carl but at that specific angle from Carl towards the table where Eric sits, there weren't. I guess the shots I took emphasized how empty that part is. I'll keep this in mind in future scenes.
I personally like MC using Officer Grumpy as a pet name and/or nickname, which is how I read it.
I literally just came across this by chance, and I'm so glad I did. Just like everyone else is saying, the character designs in the VN are so good and more importantly, very diverse from body types to faces, even with the main characters which I feel is even more rare. Speaking of main characters, I didn't even read the notes that talked about the subtle differences between all the MC options, I just discovered it myself and I was blown away even further coming back here to read that you plan on developing each MC choice even more to make each playthrough different. Don't even get me started on the sex scenes, (I am IN LOVE with Ed :-D) the premise of this story being somebody that does nothing but daydream about having relationships make me feel called about, but I think that's also a reason why I like it so much already LOL I'm not usually one for horror, but the way it's integrated in the game is so interesting that I really don't mind it. I do wish that you could somehow partner up with someone like Hyungry who makes animated sex scenes with Sims models to make it that much hotter, or even the Average Neighbor, which also makes animated sex scenes but based off real and video game characters and makes it look super realistic, I would love to see Ed in action, but a guy can dream... Anyways I'm sorry for having such a long message, but I really felt like you needed to know that you're doing a very good job, and I love a good VN that makes me horny, invested and excited for more all at the same time, and this one does just that. :-)
Thank you so much. Your comment gave me a boost today. I am actually exploring animations as well and have done some tests. I do like to add that in the future particularly in sexy scenes but I'm not making promises yet as I'm still in the process of improving the models themselves(they're okay for still images but some parts don't behave correctly when moving. I'm working on it.) Thank you for your message, it really means a lot to me.
Aww I'm glad it made you feel good! But it's really thanks to your hard work~ I'm very much looking forward to everything you have in store :-)
Best VN game I've ever player. Can't wait for the next chapters.
Thanks. You're very kind. I'm working on it!
Love the Quality
Thank you.
Damn these are the best quality renders and models I've seen in any 3D gay game, not to mention how hot the guys are (Ed and Grumpy in particular for me 👀). On top of that the story so far is interesting and I appreciate the attention to details of giving the 3 protagonist different dialogues at certain moments depending on their personality and background. Can't wait to see more!
Thank you. I appreciate the kind words. I'm still starting out on differentiating the 3 MCs and have a few things planned. It's restrained for now to different dialogues because its tricky to have diverging arcs this early. But to have unique choices and paths for each MC is the goal.
Dev, the 1.1 is good but Not good as 1.0, the talking in Dining hall seems too much , actually Just mention few words is enough. It seems Reduces gameplay but doesn't say anything that actually matters
Thank you for your feedback. It is definitely something I'm reviewing in this update. There's a lot of exposition especially in that lunch scene, not to mention it's a tad too long as well. You pointing it out helps me gauge it. I also thought there's less involvement from players here overall compared to the previous one and some feedback I've got is asking for more of those. I'll keep this in mind moving forward.
I think words are repeated several times in dining hall talking, it's important for dream afterwards, but we only need to know eric may have knife then scare someone and go to med , and we don't need to explain why, it's "leave blank", there is no need to spare the room for those words that can let readers to supplement, also when eric in, "our" reaction is completely useless, too old plot.
Oh my god, you're right. I re-read the scene and it feels like I've mentioned that detail too many times, then repeat it during the final scene with Aaron. I'm rewriting this scene right now. SPOILER warning FOR OTHERS - Cutting some stuff including all links of Eric stealing the knife since that is mentioned in the last scene anyway. Thank you for this.
Im really curious what you use to make these, its really cool and detailed!
Hello. I used Blender for majority of the stuff but other software are involved especially for texturing(Substance Painter) and refining the shapes of the models by sculpting(Zbrush) but Blender's recent improvements in their sculpting tools put it almost at par with what you get in zbrush but I'm not used to it yet.
ah ok, thank you for your response!
Love it!!!
I can't wait to play full ver.
Does anyone know programs that translate this type of visual novels? The plot looks interesting, but I won't be able to read it because English is not my first language and I'm having trouble learning it.
I use VNTranslator, super easy to use. Just install it on your computer and open the game, after that press shift + C and all texts will be taken to the program, which has a floating window with real-time translation. You will only need to configure the theme, font, size and color of the letters, but this is easy to find on YouTube.
Thank you very much for the help I'm going to try it, do you know any video that can help me to configure, the only ones that appear in the search are only demo videos.
Gonna keep an eye on this...
OM! . I can't wait to play the 2 chapter > :D
Thanks.
whoa i did not expect to be this good tbh,
i thought it was just fuck in the cell thing 🤣 but it has solid story in it.
i really enjoyed it so keep the good work
p.s : i love ed he's so dreamy XD
Thansk. I'm glad to hear it.
Congrats! The design was very detailed.
❤️👏🏻
Thank you.
That was insanely good. Thanks for making this and I absolutely can't wait to see where it goes!
Thank you!
Okay, WOW, I was definitely not expecting that. I'm used to smut with some story to go with it, but damn, this is really something more ! I'm really hooked, and I can't wait to play the rest of the game ! I mean the scenes were amazing, but the horror parts were also really good !
This was a very good surprise, even in this early state. Well done ! I'll follow this closely :D
Night !
Thank you so much!
Loving it so far! The models look fantastic (and I'm very picky about 3D stuff), the dreams are sexy and I'm very intrigued by what is going on with Dr. Kent. Can't wait for the next update!
Thank you.
Thank you. Yes, I intend to make a lot of potential routes with everyone including Dr. Kent.
the game is so cool, there is a story line while still ensuring gameplay--sex, but I suggest handcuffs can be smaller and fit for wrist， hands position more natural.
Wish I can get visa few months later that I can support you.
plus, I love Evan and kent.
Thank you. I do see some stuff that needs fixing and I'll work on them when I can. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
I'm quite impressed by this game. Way to go, man!
The visuals are on point. Ed is the cutest and hotest guy I've seen in such games.
I wish you good luck with this game, hoping for more content and willing to pay for it.
Thank you so much.
Cant wait for the next chapter <3
Everything is so goooooooooooooooooooooooood, the visual part is by far one of the best I've ever seen, the characters are so well made and realistic with even the smallest detail (face pores, beard, the reddish of skin, etc). The story kinda feels confusing because it's still the v1.0, but the premise looks interesting, paired with the visual aspect, it's just too good.
I'm looking forward to seeing this game's progress and maaaan, I'm just too impressed.
Thank you.
The character designs are great! They're not the typical models you see on hundreds of VN's on this site and others. It's like a breath of fresh air, and not only that, but the story really is interesting.
I'm definitely putting this on my watch list! I pray for your success timoteoxo!
Thank you so much, you're so kind.
The characters have great physical features and very well made! I will keep anticipating for future chapters!
Thank you.!
Hot! Bara is <3
Thanks.
I usually feel super awkward with that kind of game (uncanny valley) but the art is rather good and not too intimidating to me! Also, I won't lie, I was expecting just spending a silly time but... no? It turned to be an interesting story and it suddenly became more than just a smut game (nothing wrong only being a smut game for the sake of smut but I enjoy story too!). I love the fact we can choose our character, would have loved to be able to answer myself during the therapy session but I understand, as someone who also worked on this kind of narrative, having to many branches to your story can turns the thing into a true nightmare ^^' Do what you are aiming for, and if one day you want to polish a bit the game, you can always add a few things :D In any case, I was delighted by this adventure, I can't wait to see more of it! And see what's the deal with... dr. Kent >.>'
P.S.: I'll get a job soon, so I should be able to give some support somedays!
Thank you so much, you're very kind. I appreciate the interaction that already helps a lot.
Really interesting concept going beyond the classic prison fantasy, solid art. I see you are planning a mix of body types. I am more interested to see where the plot goes which is a compliment:) I think the prison fantasy is being subverted to a very large extent, I'd actually hope there are options among the routes you can take for something more traditional but ofc only if you are comfortable with noncon. Are you planning to get kinky with the sex? The dream sequence with Dr. Kent suggested so.
Thanks. The plan is definitely for multiple choices that should lead to different routes for every character and having some of those choices be rather unusual. Regarding the kinky stuff - can't confirm can't deny XD.
Will there be an android version?
Hi, I've just finished figuring this one out. My Renpy was finicky with the java requirements for building on Android and I just managed to make it work today. So now I'm able to build it. I just need to test it first a couple of times before I'll post it here. Thanks for reaching out.
It's available now.
Yeaaaaaaaaaaaa :D
I really liked it, looking forward to it :)
Thank you.
Great little tease for your game. Love the detail of the blinking eyes in the sprites, it's a nice little touch. And the music works really well with the atmosphere. Plus your body types/variety is on point, that you shouldn't alter for anyone. It's your vision, and my goodness you have a knack for such a sexy vision... Love the burly men with the round rumps Ed is an instant fav. Lastly great work with using the blur and sharpness to show what you want people to be paying attention to. Keep up the amazing work
Thank you so much. Im definitely going for the bear/bara types initially but I did make a few fit/lean types because I also want that kind of contrast in the intimate scenes.(Im one of the few who's into the fit/lean tops big bear bottom kind of scenes but the opposite is also hot). Theres a few more guys coming. And they fall into a variety of these body types.
And regarding the blur. Its a pet peeve of mine when the shot is so crystal clear all the way to the back. It works on an establishing shots but definitely feels artificial when there should be movement or focus.
Oh, I like all the body types you have going on... I'm a fan of just muscles in general, and manly looking dudes. Fit and lean, muscle built, muscle chub, basically anything with some form of muscle. And I'm also into the smaller built guy topping... but I more or less like the character I'm playing to be a top, or have choices on what the player character can do in sex scenes. But that's just me, you make this game the way you want<3 Also seems like this game might have some fun bondage play going on XD
"Also seems like this game might have some fun bondage play going on XD"
bro dont ever change your body type preference for anyone. When i saw the character design, i was like "oh oke, that is rare" and then i clicked on the game and all the characters are like this, and i slapped myself " am i dreaming?" lmao.
Haha. Thank you so much. I'll definitely try to deliver on the different body types but especially the burly bear daddy kinds.
Way to go. Ed is so dreaming tho lmao. Fml
Ed does things to my soul! He's my favorite!
I'm glad to hear that.
These characters look amazing. I was curious: What program did you use to make them and the settings from?
Thank you. A lot of it was done in blender.(which is free) but you need a few addons for certain tasks and some of them are paid. The final renders are in blender. I did all the hairs except the beards with an amazing blender addon called Hair Tool. The beards and some of the other assets were from a previous project I was involved in. The models were made using a blender addon that generates humans but its only halfway there. I still needed to refine them in a sculpting software(zbrush) and texture them(substance painter) both software I got from that previous work. This is a process you usually find for 3d games not VNs. The downside is you make a lot of things from scratch. I started making the models last November. The benefit is that you have better influence over how the final output looks.
So that's why your characters look so nice. the usual Daz characters used on these ren'py VNs tend to be a little... repetitive, and sometimes they look really weird. But your models look so natural, just seeing David's expressions on the dialogue was a touch that makes the game feel more like a conversation.
Thanks. I was actually considering Daz at the beginning. The benefit of Daz is how quicker you could immediately start building scenes because the assets are already there(though you might have to buy a few of them). I ended up not going the Daz route because I'm already a bit familiar with the process I did for this VN and some of the software I already have, I might as well take advantage of those. But it does take a lot more time though.
Thanks for the breakdown of your process! Your game immediately struck me for much the same reason as the other commenter. I'm really impressed by all you've utilized for this and your models are aspirational haha
Hi, I was just wondering if you were willing to let us know what this previous project was (was it a game? which game?), and if it was a game, was it a gay game (because I absolutely love the art in this, and would love to try out something with similar art). I understand it might not have been a game, or might not have been released, and you also might not be allowed to let people know, or want and are comfortable with others knowing, but I just thought I would ask anyways.
You got an amazing game on hand here, with hunky sexy characters (the beefier the bottom the better for me), and the writings also top notch. Keep up the good work, hope you end up with an amazing game.
Hello. Thanks for reaching out. The previous project was a small one that's not gay-related or adult, and not a game. It's kind of an animation part of a short film and I was involved with it but only briefly. I'm not really sure what happened with it too, I feel like it must have been shelved or something. You're not missing out not knowing what it is, I promise...;)
Oh my god... the characters looks so amazing and hot... every one of them, I love it. I LOVE that you went for the bara types, as soon as I get time I'll download the demo.
My favorite is David
Thank you. I was worried about people not connecting with David because he's kind of in the middle/average but he's exactly the type of character I wanted to make. Not as fit as the others but have hints that he once was, not exactly young.. The kind of guy that gets overlooked often and you don't understand why because you find him very sexy. That kind of character.
really rare nowadays there is a gay game contents with all this bara characters type goodness like this. You are doing a god work here lmao.
He looks really hot. I'm in love with David. His expressions at the dialogues are so sweet, it's the prototype of a daddy.
And I also want to mention how nice is that you include an afroamerican MC too! I'm re-playing with Devin as soon as I get to see everything with David.
Thank you. For now they have the same scenes just with different CGs. But there are a few hints here and there, some lines of dialogue that give a bit of clue where they will differ.
Love the character designs!
Thanks!
Make the game you enjoy, don't let others force you to change it. I love the body types I'm into bear/bara types too. Keep up the great work!
I second this! Loving the game so far :)
I agree, keep going with the bodybuilder/bara theme. I wouldn't mind if you introduce fat/chubby bears too, but That's only me, the game is fantastic as it is
Thanks. I'm also into the chubby bears, actually, but I'm not saying any more than that. :)
Thank you so much for the kind words.
I've played your game and it looks fantastic; and I'm very intriged about this daydreams plotline. The art is very good and even has music to solidy the game experience. I'll keep an eye on this VN and watch as it develops. Good luck with your game and happy premiere. Hugs.
PD: I really like the body of the characters, nothing to complain here; rather, I only have good things to say. I'm very fond of gym, workout and body worship porn (like JimmyZ Bodybuilder's Jam), so this for me is glorious, haha. So, if in the future you're going to add more characters and/or remake some of the one you already have, the bigger their boobs and ass, the better for me, haha (I can only imagine Ed with bigger tits and... 🤤😋)
Thank you so much. Oh my. Haha. I myself like the slightly bara/bear with the pronounced pecs so I'm a bit biased towards that but I'll try not to make it too obvious. :) I'm gauging what people like and accommodate them. There's still room, I still have a few characters to introduce.
Personally, I'm very into, gamewise, atheletic/fit guys with very big pecs (and asses too). I'm just very fond of that, haha. And, I know that that type of bodies are very unrealistic, but hell, it's a game, it's a fantasy. So, yes, I'll love to see this big guys worshipping and working out their big, and maybe unrealistic, pecs and asses. :D
Looking forward for next update, seems interesting!
However it is true, what Shotaby99 wrote, it is like all the persons are budybuilders :-)
Hey thanks for the feedback. I originally did intend to skew heavily towards bear/bara as that is what appeals to me but ended up including Fit/Athletic body types like Mike, Tarriq, MC-Devin, and Dr. Kent. They're fit/lean and athletic and definitely do not count as bodybuilders. Some of the bulkier characters like Evan and David do not necessarily count as body builders either but I understand most people would consider them as such. "Grumpy" is the only one, so far, that is a bodybuilder but even he has a good belly like Ed when naked. ;)
Hi, thanks for your answer and, mostly, for your game :-) I understand everybody has their own preferences, however in general, more body-types you insert (and the differences should really marked) the most people you will engage in your game and possibly also convince to support. Just saying :-) Sweet kisses and best wishes :-)
Yeah. Thanks. I'm beginning to understand that as well, I'll definitely try to accommodate that but maybe a bit later, as the next few stuff have been mapped out already.
Not enough body variety.
Hello, thanks for reaching out. I'll admit I do intend on leaning towards bara/bear type characters. With that said, I did end up making lean/fit/athletic character that do not fit that mold and have a few of them coming up. I'm guessing, based on your username, that you are looking for shota-type characters? Unfortunately, I don't have any plans of adding a shota or similar type of character.
Nah lean, twink, sporty is fine with me :) Just not into huge bara.